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Will you please help me finish my poem/rate/suggest?
Hi!This is my entry for a poem competintion.This poem is supposed to relate to bikes.Please rate/suggest
Beat up sneakers pressed to plastic bike petals
Scalp full of sweat
Determined to learn
Bam!pedals turning
Nervous face
Elbow pads squek with excitment
The swirving of wheels began
Determined to win she keeps going
*I cant finish it help?!?!
A voice inside
screamed at her to keep moving
tired as she was,
she listened
she used her Rapid heart beat,
as a rhythm to keep her intact
she grabbed hold of the handle
sped up her legs
and flew to the finish.
victory called to her
the end was getting near
she could have had wings
the was she flew in with such power.
hope its helpful, i'm only twelve, and my vocabulary isn't so huge.
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